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Rhein von Eswein
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PostSubject: Poet for Tomoe   Poet for Tomoe Icon_minitimeFri Dec 07, 2007 12:44 pm

Minna! Ini aku buat poet untuk Kenshin & Tomoe di RRK OVA 1.

Berhubung filmnya bikin mau nangis bgt (saking tragisnya Sad ) aku ga bisa nahan buat bikin ini.

Itung2 buat ngehibur Kenshin yh abis ditinggal Tomoe. Very Happy

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The smell of White Plum

A Tribute To Kenshin Himura & Tomoe Yukishiro By Agate von Manstein

Inspired by: “Rurouni Kenshin; A Romantic Tales From Meiji Era



In the spring

When Cherry blossom bloom

His shining edge, colored with blood

Reflected her innocent face, showing her infinite eyes

At the moment, the destiny which engaged them

Started to move




Tears of rain fall

Day by day, filled their life

The silent summer’s festive had passed

Left the bright memories

But the ignited fire ruin their coldness

It’s prologue to the sweet chapter & tragedy




The red sun will set in west soon

Far from town, the love grow

Doesn’t need even single word to grow

Under the falling leaves they try to escape the reality

He sheated his sword, she closed her journal

Love bloom & fall so fast, it suddenly come & go




Piece of snow fall softly, touch the land gently

The glimpse of bliss just for one night

Smell of white plum scatter for the first & last kiss

The gate to the past had opened, discover the tragic truth

Betrayal end this game, covered snow with blood

Pure white plum had gone, left cross scar in his live




The story end, buried the sweet illusion

Once again draw his blade, colored it by blood

To protect the other white plum

To provide the cherry blossom aren’t fall before bloom

To keep his promise to his beloved

To bring the better future to this land.

Emang agak jadul si tapi tolong dikomentarin ya!

Arigato!
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Nagi Springfield
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PostSubject: Re: Poet for Tomoe   Poet for Tomoe Icon_minitimeFri Dec 07, 2007 7:36 pm

Wow... puisi... aku jarang buat puisi dan gak gitu bisa komentarin puisi XD

tapi kalo aku bilang sih keren XD Poet for Tomoe 709708

walau dari anime lama tapi tetep ok lah~
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PostSubject: Re: Poet for Tomoe   Poet for Tomoe Icon_minitimeFri Dec 07, 2007 9:37 pm

Hm~ aku kurang bisa komentar... berhubung puisi yang terakhir aku tulis cuman buat Prologuenya Fragment Slayers...

Hm~ kalo dirasa-rasa kurang mendalam sih...

Yah... lumayan keren lah! 7.50/10 deh rasanya, ntar coba aku baca2 lagi...
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Rhein von Eswein
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PostSubject: Re: Poet for Tomoe   Poet for Tomoe Icon_minitimeSat Dec 08, 2007 12:03 pm

Hmm....

Kurang dalem ya?

Ini emang sengaja kubuat begitu. Kenshin & Tomoe kan Kenalnya di musim semi, trus mulai deket pas Summer Festival...

Pokoknya gt deh....
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PostSubject: Re: Poet for Tomoe   Poet for Tomoe Icon_minitimeSat Dec 08, 2007 5:56 pm

gak bikin puisi mengenang kematian Tomoe?
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PostSubject: Re: Poet for Tomoe   Poet for Tomoe Icon_minitimeSat Dec 08, 2007 9:40 pm

hohohoho

boleh juga tuh idenya nagi kun~~
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PostSubject: Re: Poet for Tomoe   Poet for Tomoe Icon_minitimeSun Dec 09, 2007 7:59 pm

Agate von Manstein wrote:

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The smell of White Plum

A Tribute To Kenshin Himura & Tomoe Yukishiro By Agate von Manstein

Inspired by: “Rurouni Kenshin; A Romantic Tales From Meiji Era



In the spring

When Cherry blossoms bloom

His shining edge, colored with blood

Reflect her innocent face, show her infinite eyes

At the moment, the destiny which engaged them

Started to move




rain of tears fall [dituker]

Day by day, filled their life

The silent summer’s festive had passed

Left the bright memories

But the ignited fire ruin the coldness

It’s prologue to the sweet chapter & tragedy




The red sun will set in west soon

Far from town, love grow

Doesn’t need even single word to grow

Under the falling leaves they try to escape the reality

He sheated his sword, she closed her journal

Love bloom & fall so fast, it suddenly come & go




Piece of snow fall softly, touch the land gently

The glimpse of bliss just for one night

Smell of white plum scatter for the first & last kiss

The gate to the past had opened, discover the tragic truth

Betrayal end this game, covered snow with blood

Pure white plum had gone, left cross scar in his live




The story end, buried the sweet illusion

Once again draw his blade, colored it by blood

To protect the other white plums

To prevent the cherry blossom aren’t fall before bloom (di sini maksudnya mencegah kan? provide itu menyediakan)

To keep his promise to his beloved

To bring the better future to this land.


Overall keren kok. Poet for Tomoe 709708

senangnya klo bisa bikin kaya gitu...

ah satu lagi, timeline-nya kurang jelas.
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