Rhein von Eswein Citizen of Lunar
Number of posts : 285 Age : 34 Location : Aachen Registration date : 2007-12-05
Arcana Data Name :: Rhein von Spree HP :: (100/100) Power Up:
| Subject: Poet for Tomoe Fri Dec 07, 2007 12:44 pm | |
| Minna! Ini aku buat poet untuk Kenshin & Tomoe di RRK OVA 1. Berhubung filmnya bikin mau nangis bgt (saking tragisnya ) aku ga bisa nahan buat bikin ini. Itung2 buat ngehibur Kenshin yh abis ditinggal Tomoe. - Quote :
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The smell of White Plum
A Tribute To Kenshin Himura & Tomoe Yukishiro By Agate von Manstein
Inspired by: “Rurouni Kenshin; A Romantic Tales From Meiji Era”
In the spring
When Cherry blossom bloom
His shining edge, colored with blood
Reflected her innocent face, showing her infinite eyes
At the moment, the destiny which engaged them
Started to move
Tears of rain fall
Day by day, filled their life
The silent summer’s festive had passed
Left the bright memories
But the ignited fire ruin their coldness
It’s prologue to the sweet chapter & tragedy
The red sun will set in west soon
Far from town, the love grow
Doesn’t need even single word to grow
Under the falling leaves they try to escape the reality
He sheated his sword, she closed her journal
Love bloom & fall so fast, it suddenly come & go
Piece of snow fall softly, touch the land gently
The glimpse of bliss just for one night
Smell of white plum scatter for the first & last kiss
The gate to the past had opened, discover the tragic truth
Betrayal end this game, covered snow with blood
Pure white plum had gone, left cross scar in his live
The story end, buried the sweet illusion
Once again draw his blade, colored it by blood
To protect the other white plum
To provide the cherry blossom aren’t fall before bloom
To keep his promise to his beloved
To bring the better future to this land.
Emang agak jadul si tapi tolong dikomentarin ya! Arigato! | |
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Nagi Springfield Moderator
Number of posts : 6759 Age : 33 Location : --?-- Registration date : 2007-11-12
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| Subject: Re: Poet for Tomoe Fri Dec 07, 2007 7:36 pm | |
| Wow... puisi... aku jarang buat puisi dan gak gitu bisa komentarin puisi XD tapi kalo aku bilang sih keren XD walau dari anime lama tapi tetep ok lah~ | |
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Xavier-sama Moderator
Number of posts : 1246 Age : 30 Location : Order of the Shadowknights 21st Division's Base Registration date : 2007-11-10
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| Subject: Re: Poet for Tomoe Fri Dec 07, 2007 9:37 pm | |
| Hm~ aku kurang bisa komentar... berhubung puisi yang terakhir aku tulis cuman buat Prologuenya Fragment Slayers... Hm~ kalo dirasa-rasa kurang mendalam sih... Yah... lumayan keren lah! 7.50/10 deh rasanya, ntar coba aku baca2 lagi... | |
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Rhein von Eswein Citizen of Lunar
Number of posts : 285 Age : 34 Location : Aachen Registration date : 2007-12-05
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| Subject: Re: Poet for Tomoe Sat Dec 08, 2007 12:03 pm | |
| Hmm.... Kurang dalem ya? Ini emang sengaja kubuat begitu. Kenshin & Tomoe kan Kenalnya di musim semi, trus mulai deket pas Summer Festival... Pokoknya gt deh.... | |
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Nagi Springfield Moderator
Number of posts : 6759 Age : 33 Location : --?-- Registration date : 2007-11-12
Arcana Data Name :: Ray Reinhart HP :: (100/101) Power Up:
| Subject: Re: Poet for Tomoe Sat Dec 08, 2007 5:56 pm | |
| gak bikin puisi mengenang kematian Tomoe? | |
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Irisviel Moderator
Number of posts : 6748 Age : 35 Location : Beside watashi no Izark-sama Registration date : 2007-11-11
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| Subject: Re: Poet for Tomoe Sat Dec 08, 2007 9:40 pm | |
| hohohoho boleh juga tuh idenya nagi kun~~ | |
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Firenze Allyster Moderator
Number of posts : 1098 Age : 31 Location : Nowhere... Registration date : 2007-11-11
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| Subject: Re: Poet for Tomoe Sun Dec 09, 2007 7:59 pm | |
| - Agate von Manstein wrote:
- Quote :
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The smell of White Plum
A Tribute To Kenshin Himura & Tomoe Yukishiro By Agate von Manstein
Inspired by: “Rurouni Kenshin; A Romantic Tales From Meiji Era”
In the spring
When Cherry blossoms bloom
His shining edge, colored with blood
Reflect her innocent face, show her infinite eyes
At the moment, the destiny which engaged them
Started to move
rain of tears fall [dituker]
Day by day, filled their life
The silent summer’s festive had passed
Left the bright memories
But the ignited fire ruin the coldness
It’s prologue to the sweet chapter & tragedy
The red sun will set in west soon
Far from town, love grow
Doesn’t need even single word to grow
Under the falling leaves they try to escape the reality
He sheated his sword, she closed her journal
Love bloom & fall so fast, it suddenly come & go
Piece of snow fall softly, touch the land gently
The glimpse of bliss just for one night
Smell of white plum scatter for the first & last kiss
The gate to the past had opened, discover the tragic truth
Betrayal end this game, covered snow with blood
Pure white plum had gone, left cross scar in his live
The story end, buried the sweet illusion
Once again draw his blade, colored it by blood
To protect the other white plums
To prevent the cherry blossom aren’t fall before bloom (di sini maksudnya mencegah kan? provide itu menyediakan)
To keep his promise to his beloved
To bring the better future to this land.
Overall keren kok. senangnya klo bisa bikin kaya gitu... ah satu lagi, timeline-nya kurang jelas. | |
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