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PostSubject: Poetry - story of life and destiny   Thu Dec 13, 2007 6:34 pm

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Story of life and Destiny, part 1


Sing a sad song o' despair destiny
Through the sorrow of piano keys
Upon the violin strings, o so tiny!
Within this destined destiny, I am made

The goddess Clotho, spin the golden thread
Along with each of my breath
All with no doubt,
All have decided...

So then, I break open my sight
Open my fingers, I grab my fate tight
I spread my wings, walking into life
and withought fright,
to my fate, deeper I shall dive...

Silahkan dikomen minna, hoho, poetry aneh tentang kehidupan, n sudah pasti nggak akan bagus...

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry - story of life and destiny   Fri Dec 14, 2007 7:47 am

hohohoho

karena saia gak terlalu ngreti poetry (puisi) yah~~

hmm...

ada beberapa yang rada aneh aja dibacanya sih... tap mungkin itu bahasanya puisi hoho
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry - story of life and destiny   Fri Dec 14, 2007 11:12 am

That's what i said "COOL"

Keren bgt Allys-san.

Kata-katanya itu lho.....

Bikin merinding....
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry - story of life and destiny   Fri Dec 14, 2007 8:40 pm

Woops, gw lupa mengganti beberapa kata... hehe thx yah, Agate-san

btw, o' = of

@Izark: bagian mana yang aneh?

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Story o' life and destiny, part2

Rise my head, I look to the clear sky
To where the birds fly
To where the rain shall cry
And so then, my eyes shan't dry

But then I am blinded
My heart, my mind
So then I raise my hand pleaded,
but the goddess Lachesis measure my thread of fate,
and my fate isn't over yet

So I cry cry cry
Pleaded to the dark grey sky
So that quickly I may die
So that I shall not fly

hmm, silahkan komenna.....

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry - story of life and destiny   Sat Dec 15, 2007 12:28 pm

hahaha itu dia masalahnya bu~

kek "the Goddess clotho"

ama "Sing a sad song o' despair destiny"

menurut i seih rada aneh ajah~ tapi mungkin cuma feeling saia sajah hoho
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry - story of life and destiny   Sat Dec 15, 2007 2:20 pm

Keren

That's all...
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry - story of life and destiny   Sat Dec 15, 2007 5:10 pm

The goddess Clotho kan emang namanya mas.... ,mo digimanain lagi..

hmm...

yang sing a sad song of despair destiny sih, emang agak aneh juga... hihihi

@agate: thanks!

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry - story of life and destiny   Sat Dec 15, 2007 5:20 pm

hmm

kirain pake cloth hohohoho

ato mending jadiin Goddes dress aja gitu??

haha~ aneh yah~
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry - story of life and destiny   Sat Dec 15, 2007 6:40 pm

Goddess dress???

maksud??

hey hey mas, ini itu mitologi Yunani...

The Fates, consist of Clotho, Lachesis sama Atropos. mereka itu yang memintal, mengukur sama memutus benang kehidupan.. gitu loh..

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry - story of life and destiny   Sun Dec 16, 2007 8:04 am

<-- lupa ingatan mode ON

ooh iya seih~

emang mito yunani hhihihihi

/me sebelum digampar Luna~
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry - story of life and destiny   Sun Dec 23, 2007 3:46 pm

Izark

yang part3 nya udah ada,tapi nanti ah, hpnya di atas seih.. >.<

hoho

the last part... khukhukhu

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry - story of life and destiny   Sun Dec 23, 2007 3:54 pm

alah alah~

ambil ambill hoho~
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry - story of life and destiny   Sun Dec 23, 2007 5:40 pm

iyaa iyaa, saia ambil~

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Then come the rain
Along with the pain
From above, I see the deathly insane
Faintly come, slow and certain

The goddess Apathos cut my thread
Fate has over its led
Tears are no more shed
Life is dead

My souls vanish
like the purple dead irish,
belief shall not again exist
Because I have reached my finish...

SELESAI! akhirnya... khukhukhu...

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry - story of life and destiny   Mon Dec 24, 2007 12:03 pm

ahl ini bukan DP yah, tadi baca-baca blog, trus nemu sesuatu yang sudah lama kulupakan..

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You can't kill a killer, can you? Because a killer means to kill, not to be killed.


As I am too.

I am a killer. I kill love, hate, and somehow, friendship. I cannot
caring, I cannot Loving. All I know are sorrows an painfulness. My
patron is hate. I cannot believe in humans, nor animals. Those are just
make me weak and blind. I am a lone wolf... My life is dark, my soul is
black.


You can't hate me, You can't love me. I am not exist, but I am real. I can forgiving, but also I hating...


-You shan't understand me at all-

Commentnya jadi dua yah..

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