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PostSubject: ~TSUBASA No RHEED~ *by Luke de Carouze*   Tue Jan 01, 2008 1:20 am

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PostSubject: Re: ~TSUBASA No RHEED~ *by Luke de Carouze*   Tue Jan 01, 2008 2:18 am

wee..... emang banyak nama... tapi karena ada dictionarinya bagus kok

he, no nudity?
/me dari Luke~

hm... aku bilang yah bagus untuk permulaan.....

kalo aku pikir... nanti Luke bakal make 2 pedang itu kah?

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PostSubject: Re: ~TSUBASA No RHEED~ *by Luke de Carouze*   Tue Jan 01, 2008 3:27 am

hoo...
soal 2 pedang berlawanan itu sudah menjadi satu dan menyegel kedua
saudaranya dan menjadi sebuah pedang kekuatan berlawanan tanpa batas...
uniknya pedang itu tak pernah digunakan oleh Luke dan tertanam di tubuh Luke de Carouze

untuk Lebih jelasnya nanti kuposting Character Profilenya

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PostSubject: Re: ~TSUBASA No RHEED~ *by Luke de Carouze*   Tue Jan 01, 2008 10:24 am

Wah, menarik..

saia tunggu deh lanjutannya~

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PostSubject: Re: ~TSUBASA No RHEED~ *by Luke de Carouze*   Tue Jan 01, 2008 4:27 pm

Wow... jadi kerasa suasana Ragnarok...

hm.. semakin banyak kota2... tapi bagus... dictionary nya

oh iya... Wendy ama Loki tuh temen Luke?
lanjutkanlah Luke

/me ke Idun~

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PostSubject: Re: ~TSUBASA No RHEED~ *by Luke de Carouze*   Sat Jan 05, 2008 4:47 am

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PostSubject: Re: ~TSUBASA No RHEED~ *by Luke de Carouze*   Sat Jan 05, 2008 8:34 am

Karakter utama ada 6....

2 cowo sisanya cewe euy...

oh iya.. mau nanya.... itu kalo umurnya 100 tahun++ tuh mukanya masih muda
ato emang udah tua??? (umur 1000 tahun?)

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PostSubject: Re: ~TSUBASA No RHEED~ *by Luke de Carouze*   Sat Jan 05, 2008 8:34 am

Karakter utama ada 6....

2 cowo sisanya cewe euy...

oh iya.. mau nanya.... itu kalo umurnya 100 tahun++ tuh mukanya masih muda
ato emang udah tua??? (umur 1000 tahun?)

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PostSubject: Re: ~TSUBASA No RHEED~ *by Luke de Carouze*   Sat Jan 05, 2008 9:03 am

Nagi koq DP

hmm... saia kumpulkan buat dianalisa dulu yaph~

u postingnya rada pusieng
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PostSubject: Re: ~TSUBASA No RHEED~ *by Luke de Carouze*   Tue Jan 08, 2008 6:33 pm

Great job Luke!!

Very amazing!!

Bravo, bravo!

Saya tunggu lanjutannya dengan tidak sabar.
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PostSubject: Re: ~TSUBASA No RHEED~ *by Luke de Carouze*   Thu Jan 10, 2008 11:40 am

Heh baru baca semuanya sekarang...

Luke, u banyak ngambil dari mmitologi yah.

kebanyakan sin Norse kan? tapi dicamour Yunani, jadi ada cerberus dan Hydra.

Tapi 3 anak Loki sama istri raksasanya (lupa siapa namanya) ada juga.. wkwkwk. Hel, Fenrir sama Jormungandr (maap, kaga bisa bikin o dengan dua titik).. tmen gw nyebut Jormundgandr dengan sbutan Midgardsormr (ular midgard)

Keren loh Luke~

Ceritanya udah ada? ato belom?

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PostSubject: Re: ~TSUBASA No RHEED~ *by Luke de Carouze*   Thu Jan 10, 2008 11:50 am

Luke.. kalo perlu kau post komiknya gih....

ada komiknya kan?

katanya sih ceritanya dah jalan..

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PostSubject: Re: ~TSUBASA No RHEED~ *by Luke de Carouze*   Thu Jan 10, 2008 2:36 pm

Alyss >>> hehe... aku ngambil beberapa mitologi yang terkenal
lalu aku padukan jadi satu dengan cerita orisinil, jadi
mitologi-mitologinya hanya tambahan-tambahan saja.

nagi >>> kalo soal komik blom jalan tapi cerita mulai jalan
buset dah satu episode aja makan 14 halaman
( soalnya aku langsung ngembangin inti ceritanya )

lagi sendat di bagian pertengahan episode pertama ( ah siaaallll ) >,<
tapi Endingnya sudah ada kok
jadi tinggal ngembangin bagian pertengahan cerita

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PostSubject: Re: ~TSUBASA No RHEED~ *by Luke de Carouze*   Thu Jan 10, 2008 6:42 pm

Hmm, ati-ati klo u mikirin endingnya sebelom tengah-tengahnya.

soalnya ntar suka jadi nggak nyambung sama endingnya..

Tapi-tapi... mitologinya kerasa banget

XD

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PostSubject: Re: ~TSUBASA No RHEED~ *by Luke de Carouze*   Fri Jan 11, 2008 9:53 am

sejak denger kata2 Loki... wow.. mitologi nih~

tapi bahaya nih.. semakin banyak kata2 dari mitologi....

susah aku apalin nih

yah... untuk yang selanjutnya ada gak Luke?

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PostSubject: Re: ~TSUBASA No RHEED~ *by Luke de Carouze*   Sat Jan 12, 2008 1:24 am

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PostSubject: Re: ~TSUBASA No RHEED~ *by Luke de Carouze*   Sat Jan 12, 2008 10:18 am



kalo udah gini.. rasanya bakal keren kalo dibuat game RPG nya

seru juga nih awal2nya

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PostSubject: Re: ~TSUBASA No RHEED~ *by Luke de Carouze*   Sat Jan 12, 2008 6:18 pm

Luke-san, profe amat sih bikinnya.

Jadi ngiri neh.
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PostSubject: Re: ~TSUBASA No RHEED~ *by Luke de Carouze*   Sun Jan 13, 2008 12:47 am

Nagi>>> pengennya sih mau dibuat game... hehe entar bisa nyaingi FF ( kaleeeee )
Agate >>> hmm... aku baru pertama kali buat cerita kok, sebelum itu harus disiapkan secara matang pula

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PostSubject: Re: ~TSUBASA No RHEED~ *by Luke de Carouze*   Sun Jan 13, 2008 1:00 am

Wow... bener2 kerasa RPG nya.... kyk FF.. ToE... dll lah...

yang aku suka disini tuh Wendy nya XD

rasanya cocok

lanjutkan lagi Luke

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PostSubject: Re: ~TSUBASA No RHEED~ *by Luke de Carouze*   Sun Jan 13, 2008 2:27 pm

Wah, kayanya rame yah..

tapi, apa Wendynya nggak terlalu sempurna?

tapi RPG banget~ keren~

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