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PostSubject: Maid “Watashi no Tsubasa” Anna   Wed Nov 21, 2007 12:34 am

Ah semalam baru buat kerangkanya^^
Mo wa kerjain abis UTS ini Very Happy
Smoga ep 1nya cpt kelar hahaha Very Happy
ini baru synopsisnya^^d

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Illia seorang mahasiswa bertemu dengan seorang anak perempuan yang secara tidak sengaja menabraknya saat berlari. Ketika ia akan menolong anak perempuan itu tiba-tiba sudah menghilang dari hadapannya.
Belum hilang rasa kagetnya, saat ia pulang ke apartemennya ia menemukan anak perempuan itu menyambutnya di dalam apartemennya. Tentu saja Illia kaget bukan main. Anak perempuan itu bersedia menjadi pelayannya tanpa bayaran sepersenpun. Illia tidak masalah dalam hal ini memperbolehkan ia berkerja dan tinggal di apartementnya.
Lalu anak perempuan itu memperkenalkan diri ke Illia dengan nama, Anna.
Malamnya ketika Illia tidur. Secara tidak sengaja Illia terbangun. Ia melihat sesuatu yang tidak ia percaya. Anna berdiri di pinggir jendela kamarnya dan mengeluarkan sayap hitam seperti burung gagak.
Lalu apa yang Illia lihat ini hanya mimpi? Siapakah Anna sebenarnya? Dan apa tujuannya?
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PostSubject: Re: Maid “Watashi no Tsubasa” Anna   Thu Nov 22, 2007 9:02 am

*mengingat sebuah anime

hmm... boleh nieh idenya XD XD XD sebelum dikomen... di lanjut dulu XD XD XD
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PostSubject: Re: Maid “Watashi no Tsubasa” Anna   Fri Nov 23, 2007 5:15 pm

Hmm, lanjut dulu deh....

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PostSubject: Re: Maid “Watashi no Tsubasa” Anna   Mon Dec 03, 2007 1:16 am

wah wah

mandek kayaknya hahahahaha

Illia chan~~~ lanjutannya gimana??
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PostSubject: Re: Maid “Watashi no Tsubasa” Anna   Thu Dec 06, 2007 11:42 am

Wew, mau jd romantic, action apa horror neh?

Kalo sayap hitam bagai burung gagak, berarti sayap dari bulu dunk? Berarti cewenya ga mungkin Vampir ya?

Ato ada vampir yang punya sayap bulu?

Tak taulah aku, tp sinopsisnya aja dah bikin penasaran, Ganbatte nee Illia-san!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Maid “Watashi no Tsubasa” Anna   Fri Dec 07, 2007 9:39 pm

Hm~ cukup menarik konsepnya... jadi pengen lanjutin Oily Paper nieh... T_T

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PostSubject: Re: Maid “Watashi no Tsubasa” Anna   Fri Dec 07, 2007 10:44 pm

lha?? emangnya Oily Paper udah kemana Nite??

hohohoho

apakah anda sudah kering ide??

peace ah ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Maid “Watashi no Tsubasa” Anna   Sun Dec 09, 2007 12:00 am

Ah tinggal setengah jalan lagi ep 1nya kelar
maaf lama karena sibuk di RP Very Happy
bsk mgkn da kelar Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Maid “Watashi no Tsubasa” Anna   Sun Dec 09, 2007 7:45 pm

Sip sip, ditunggu, Illia san...

-soalnya punya gw juga gersang ide-

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PostSubject: Re: Maid “Watashi no Tsubasa” Anna   Mon Dec 10, 2007 8:26 am

/me tendang Allys

hohohohoho

gersang ide semua yah?? yare yare

hmm... saia menunggu saja hoho
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PostSubject: Re: Maid “Watashi no Tsubasa” Anna   Mon Dec 10, 2007 10:18 pm

Hm~ idenya unik sih... jadi penasaran abis XD

Daripada aku bikin cerita anak yang mo bakar gedung Diknas...

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PostSubject: Re: Maid “Watashi no Tsubasa” Anna   Mon Dec 10, 2007 11:37 pm

Ah gomen miinaa >.<
gara-gara dosenku kasih tugas programing jd tertunda sementara^^a
oh ya berhubung gw ntar mo uplot tu cerita pakai Word
ada tmpt untuk nyimpen file gt ga yang beruapa link?

Nite: Waduh boleh tu cerita yang bakar gedung diknas^^d

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PostSubject: Re: Maid “Watashi no Tsubasa” Anna   Tue Dec 11, 2007 9:42 am

hhohohohoho

klo dibikin file males bacanya pak hoho

mending diu post disini aja sebagian sebagian hohoho
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PostSubject: Re: Maid “Watashi no Tsubasa” Anna   Tue Dec 11, 2007 12:39 pm

hahaha gt yah^^
tp tar jd ga rapi hehehe Very Happy
ah 80% lagi kelar....
hohohohoh

Izark: Dibikin file kan bisa di save lalu disimpan dan dikoleksi (Sudah direncanakan dengan matang untuk tujuan tertentu)

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PostSubject: Re: Maid “Watashi no Tsubasa” Anna   Tue Dec 11, 2007 1:06 pm

itu seih buat transaksi pribadi lewat YM aja pak hoho

disini kan forum

klo peke begituan bikin males hoho
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PostSubject: Re: Maid “Watashi no Tsubasa” Anna   Tue Dec 11, 2007 5:34 pm

me juga mau...... ntar aku rampok dari Izark sama aja...

A.S.A.P yah

karena aku sedang senang membaca, apalagi novel orang laen

makanya, siniin.... Twisted Evil

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PostSubject: Re: Maid “Watashi no Tsubasa” Anna   Tue Dec 11, 2007 6:01 pm

hohohohoho

makanya i bilang file dipake buat transaksi private hhohoho

ntar klo dah ada i kasih tau deh
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PostSubject: Re: Maid “Watashi no Tsubasa” Anna   Tue Dec 11, 2007 8:35 pm

Eh, bentar lagi jadi katanya...

hohohohohoho... Gw minta dari novelist-nya langsung aja ah~

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PostSubject: Re: Maid “Watashi no Tsubasa” Anna   Tue Dec 11, 2007 8:52 pm

wakakaka udah kelar nih Very Happy

EPisode 1 Maid"Watashi no Tsubasa" Anna!
http://h1.badwaresite.www/LoliconTime/MaidWatashinotsubasaAnnaepisode1.doc
donlot disitu aja yah Very Happy
KOment please ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Maid “Watashi no Tsubasa” Anna   Wed Dec 12, 2007 7:45 am

ya elah si bapak ILLIA~~~

bener bener dipost linknya hohohoho

ya udah lah

saia baca dulu ya~~~
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PostSubject: Re: Maid “Watashi no Tsubasa” Anna   Wed Dec 12, 2007 9:56 am

Hahahaha soalnya kalau di post dalam bentuk posting tar panjang banget hahahahhaa
kasih koment yah *Kabur*

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PostSubject: Re: Maid “Watashi no Tsubasa” Anna   Wed Dec 12, 2007 9:59 am

hohohohohoho

makanya pak~~

per bagian ajah postingnya hohohoho

hmm... masih lom isa dikomen~~ besok aja lah yah hoho
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PostSubject: Re: Maid “Watashi no Tsubasa” Anna   Wed Dec 12, 2007 3:02 pm



RATINGNYA DEWASA!

Ya ampun, Illia san, kok u sampe ada kaya gitunya sih....

melibatkan orang laen lagi...

dasar

tapi bagus juga denk, timelinenya jelas, karakteristik tokoh juga jelas..

Keep it up! n ditunggu chappie 2-nya

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PostSubject: Re: Maid “Watashi no Tsubasa” Anna   Wed Dec 12, 2007 9:35 pm

Hm~ dari sisi sastra sih dah

Tapi rating...
Rata2 sih sama yang dibilangin Allys... padahal dah aku print... pas baca baru sadar... Sieg aja panik tuw, sih Alice malah nyentuhnya ga tahulah... mana Otouto aku baca di kelas keras-keras lagie...

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PostSubject: Re: Maid “Watashi no Tsubasa” Anna   Wed Dec 12, 2007 10:07 pm

Wah wah sastra masa da bagus=_=a
presaan tiap ngasih crita ke Editor dihajar pakai jarum karena sastra gw ancur banget
huhuhu T_T

Wahahaha maaf lupa sediain rating
ini RAtingnya 15+ kok Very Happy

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